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Comic 33 - winter 12

21st Dec 2011, 12:00 AM in adventura
winter 12
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Brickyman 21st Dec 2011, 5:47 AM edit delete reply
Brickyman
No offence but I can NOT make sense of this comic, to me it's just a load of nonsense. if that's on purpose then I suppose it's OK but really, I have no idea what the plot in this webcomic is.

Maybe you need to try and make the plot clearer and not have so many things going on at once. Also maybe slow it down and have more character development because at the moment you have so many characters and I can't keep track of them all, let alone what their character is like.

Also try to make the photo's clearer and make it so that the characters are talking to each other, not at each other.

Hope this helps a bit.
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