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Comic 10 - Confront the dragon lord

4th Oct 2011, 7:00 PM in chaos supreme
Confront the dragon lord
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thewriter13 4th Oct 2011, 7:00 PM edit delete
thewriter13
It's the confrontation between dark lord Dragon and the prince.
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LLEvarts 2nd Jan 2012, 3:26 AM edit delete reply
I must agree with what has been said in previous comments. I have no idea what is going on, who most of the characters are supposed to be, or what the point (if there is one) of the comic is. This would be much easier to understand if you weren't trying to randomly intermix elements from a half dozen radically different genres. What I see here reminds me of the stories my daughter writes. She is in 4th grade and her favorite thing to do is to tr and fit every idea she has into one big story. I will give you the same advice I gave her: pick one idea and go with it.

Please know that I am not trying to be harsh or dscouraging here. Everyone starts out basic and improves with experience. I suggest putting some effort into getting your lighting and focus to where the pictures are clear. Alsoyou may want to try less "busy" scenes. I had a very hard time beteen the poor quality of many of the images and the sheer amount of things going in them trying to make sense if what I was seeing.
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